Talk:Remarks: Processing Mazes
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6. "the beginning of the second for loop inside of draw()" -- sounds a bit like jargon. Is that the best way to say this? (I'm sorry, I don't know what it means.) | 6. "the beginning of the second for loop inside of draw()" -- sounds a bit like jargon. Is that the best way to say this? (I'm sorry, I don't know what it means.) | ||
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| + | 7. While I get the arc of these remarks and the fact that they end with the "distant cousin," let's say, and it's time to stop, then ending is too sudden. I would argue that a sentence summing up the gist of the remarks would help our readers land comfortably after this loop into another (Processing) world. | ||
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